AdministratorApril 28, 2022 at 11:51 PM
word count is 243 words, make sure at least 250 words are required
these ability (abilities) (is) through community service
It will encourages (encourage)
g through their (his) persona- as you are referring to “student”
Feedback : There is room to improve lexical resources and try to avoid making short sentences , rather try to use wide variety of structures like dependent clauses, compound & complex ones.