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  • Falak

    April 28, 2022 at 11:51 PM

    word count is 243 words, make sure at least 250 words are required

    these ability (abilities) (is) through community service

    It will encourages (encourage)

    g through their (his) persona- as you are referring to “student”

    Feedback : There is room to improve lexical resources and try to avoid making short sentences , rather try to use wide variety of structures like dependent clauses, compound & complex ones.

    Keep writing

    Band: 3.25/6

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