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Nowadays, supermarkets are trying to sell numerous imported items from all over the world instead of selling the goods that were produced locally. The process of acquiring goods from other countries has become easy for traders due to hassle-free import and export policies. However, it has both positive and negative effects on the market. In my opinion, it is good news for those who are interested to buy things from foreign countries.
If we think about the negative aspects, for example, vegetables and fruits produced by the local farmers are not having demand because these imported items are available at cheaper price and the consumers are not ready pay more cost, when they are able to get the same for lesser amount. Secondly, people are more attracted to experience the new taste rather than having the same old palate. So, it has become a new trend to try different items from different countries.
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The process of acquiring goods from other countries has become easy for traders due to hassle-free import and export policies, which in a way have both positive and negative effects on the market.
