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Dear Mr. James,
I am Sherry from Maharashtra. I am writing this letter to inform you that there is a mistake noted about my town, Nasik, in an international magazine and I would like to bring it to your notice.
I discovered an error in Times Square Magazine, which stated that Nasik is a city of tomatoes when, in fact, it is a city of grapes.Nasik is well known as “Wine City” because here on the farms we can see huge grapes cultivation and it has the best climatic conditions to grow grapes.
International tourists often buy Times Square Magazine for their leisure purposes during their travels to kill time. So, it is very important to support the contents of the magazine with detailed research. Otherwise, this can mislead people and they tend to end up with the wrong information about specific things.
I believe that all the copies published on October 24 should not be distributed because they contain incorrect information.The publishers should always cross-verify before it is printed.
I am looking forward to seeing this matter resolved as soon as possible.
Thanks,
Yours sincerely,
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