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  • Aanchal

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    April 29, 2022 at 7:36 PM

    Dear sir/madam,

    After having seen your article in your travel magazine last weekend which wrote about various places to visit in Kurali and entry fee. I saw some error in the provided information.

    You mentioned in the article about Rose garden that carnival is held twice a year and there is also entry fee for visiting that place. However, carnival is held once a year and entry is fee for all the visitors.

    Thus, I would request you rectify the mistakes as it will affect the tourists because it will disappoint them and they won’t able to see the carnival for which they have arrived. Also, money they spent on trip will be wasted. Above all these mistakes it will hamper the goodwill of our country and state.

    I would request to make up for the mistake which you have done. A fresh article should be published stating error committed and mention all the correct information. So that the trust of audience stays intact.

    If you require any information, feel free to contact me.

    Your sincerely

    Aanchal

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