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  • Falak

    May 18, 2022 at 12:37 PM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31710


    repeated use of “also” in introduction leading to monotonous structure.

    parent would show agreement

    would never utilize it properly.

    they would soon get another.

    where he would....

    a person would not be able to adjust…

    he would not respect a

    he would lose – repeated structure throughout the essay.

    Feedback : Task achievement , coherence and attempt to use lexical resources can be easily observed and appreciated. There is improvement , but there is requirement to work more rigorously on sentence structure

    Keep writing!!

    band: 3/6

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