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  • Falak

    May 18, 2022 at 12:37 PM


    repeated use of “also” in introduction leading to monotonous structure.

    parent would show agreement

    would never utilize it properly.

    they would soon get another.

    where he would....

    a person would not be able to adjust…

    he would not respect a

    he would lose – repeated structure throughout the essay.

    Feedback : Task achievement , coherence and attempt to use lexical resources can be easily observed and appreciated. There is improvement , but there is requirement to work more rigorously on sentence structure

    Keep writing!!

    band: 3/6

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