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– Paragraphing is fine.
– When using name of countries, only first letter will be in capital. Article’THE’ will come with US. For example, The US….
-BP 1 :In 2002, more than 5000 students from China and USA enrolled in CANADA colleges whereas only a few thousand from India. 45%, 9%, and 35% increases in subsequent years from countries such as China, the United States, and India, respectively.
Band Score: 1.5/3
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