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  • Falak

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    June 3, 2022 at 8:30 AM
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    Overall (,) there are significant changes

    the farmland and the forest park has been replaced by some buildings (golf course) and the tennis court

    . Although (moreover,) the fishing port has been removed

    Therefore in the south west direction car park has been added which is close to the hotel (therefore is not suitable)

    Though (through) all these years

    Feedback : Faulty usage of cohesive devices has been observed at many places. I would advise to understand their right usage.

    Band: 1.5/3

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