AdministratorJune 5, 2022 at 5:22 PM520 Network PointsActivity Points 6040
-I am writing this letter to express my interest in volunteering for a school science excursion. I am the father of Avinash, who is a student of class 6th in your esteemed school.
-On top of that, as I am teaching chemistry, I believe my presence will really help students to learn a lot of things from me on the trip.
-Furthermore, I really enjoy spending time with kids, and I am ready to meet new kids and add some value to their knowledge.
Connectors are used in all the right places. All the points are covered.
Few errors in prepositions and use of gerund.
Band Score- 2.5/3