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  • isha

    Administrator
    June 5, 2022 at 5:22 PM

    -I am writing this letter to express my interest in volunteering for a school science excursion. I am the father of Avinash, who is a student of class 6th in your esteemed school.

    -On top of that, as I am teaching chemistry, I believe my presence will really help students to learn a lot of things from me on the trip.

    -Furthermore, I really enjoy spending time with kids, and I am ready to meet new kids and add some value to their knowledge.

    Feedback:

    Connectors are used in all the right places. All the points are covered.

    Few errors in prepositions and use of gerund.

    Band Score- 2.5/3

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