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it is not (the) right path to pursue,
without giving a person to (“to” is not required) another chance
justifies a crime, Moreover(,) these practices
these practices results (result) in loss of lives along with crime.- subject-verb agreement
however a chance should be given (to) culprits by engaging to (“to” is not required) them through (in) various programmes designed by psychologist and experts,
however capital punishment are (is) not the right justice
Feedback : There is strong need to work on prepositions and subject-verb agreement.
Band: 3/6
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