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    June 6, 2022 at 11:19 AM
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    As per recent studies, it is observed that almost all lawbreakers tend to show violent traits and commit additional crimes upon being discharged from confinement. This essay will explain the causes and potential solutions to reduce it.

    There are several reasons why offenders continue to commit crimes after being released. It is their lack of ability to socialize and evolve to survive in and from the hatred of the world. To be more specific, society refuses to look at the positive aspects or tries to understand whether they changed or not, instead criticising them, leading them to believe that they should remain the same person they were before. Another reason is due to the treatment they get in prison. For example, the brutal punishments and an environment filled with negative thoughts will not help them to change into a better person and will lead them to commit crimes.

    To tackle such cases, it is important to analyze and create new approaches to mold their thought process. So, for this, the form of punishment should depend upon what type of criminal activity was committed by the offender. For example, the rehabilitation centers should work on their mental abilities to ensure they have changed and are emotionally stable to face the outside world. One more solution can be to provide them with financial means to cope with the fast-growing world as they would be all by themselves and this may help them to get back to their normal life.

    In conclusion, to avoid or reduce the wrongdoing by lawbreakers, these solutions to recheck and provide them with an effective rehabilitation center will increase the chances of turning them into stable beings. It also depends on individuals’ attitudes whether to get influenced by others or to remain unchanged in committing crimes.

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