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In today’s world, we can see that infotech has been a game changer and has made life much more convenient and flexible. People can now easily connect with each other virtually through technology. It is very convenient to work from home on mobiles or laptops. For example, when COVID started and there was lockdown everywhere, it was very difficult to go to offices and schools, but due to such an advancement in the IT sector, we could all attend all classes and jobs while sitting at our homes. Information technology has also created a lot of job opportunities all over the world. As we all know, unemployment is increasing continuously, due to which economy is also declining, but as information technology is a growing sector, there are so many job vacancies and opportunities for lots of people.
On the other hand, there are also some disadvantages due to this sector, like the sedentary lifestyle of people. Our lifestyle has been changed due to the gadgets and technology around us. The dependence on IT has made us couch potatoes. Furthermore, due to sitting all day on a screen, many of us do not prefer to exercise or do physical activity, which is making us overweight and obese, leading to so many chronic conditions and illness.
In conclusion, I would like to state that the advantages clearly overshadow the disadvantages, as infotech has made our day-to-day lives more comfortable. It has made everything just a click away and is clearly saving our time. I believe that there should be more investments in the information technology department so that it flourishes more as it is a very important sector with respect to our future.
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