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  • Falak

    Administrator
    June 13, 2022 at 8:13 AM
    720 Network Points
    Activity Points 31710

    Introduction lacks any information about solution

    There are a lot of reasons behind this problem of leaving the country. One of the main reasons is the high pay rates. – question doesn’t demand causes.

    Try to avoid the use of “we” , almost whole second B.P follows the same structure.

    repetitive usage of words has been observed.

    Paragraphing has not been done well. Introduce an idea , discuss it and compile it.

    Lack of sentence structure variety and cohesive devices

    Band: 2/6

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