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  • Falak

    June 14, 2022 at 11:05 PM

    Foreign companies gives (give) much opportunities

    repetitive usage of words (working professionals, home country, good work balance, ..). Need to work on lexical resources.

    short sentences in entire essay hence, lacks variety and range

    when their childrens (children) didn’t attended (attend) their parents (parents’) funeral

    good work (life) balance

    people have to left (leave) their country for working.

    There is need to work on tenses as well.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 2.5/6

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