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  • Falak

    Administrator
    June 15, 2022 at 8:38 PM

    about expenditure of (on) fast foods in millions (pounds) by three income groups

    I would advise to follow the structure as discussed in the class. There is need to write overview and no conclusion is required.

    No cohesive devices have been used to establish cohesion

    comparison of data is required and sentence structure needs to be improved.

    No Band score as candidate needs to work on all possible parameters.

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