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  • Falak

    July 9, 2022 at 11:49 AM

    service should become (an) essential part of high school education

    Involving (Involvement) in community service makes the students

    moral standards and crimes (crime rate)

    where the academy (educational institutions/ authorities) made

    In addition to that (,) they were also involved

    fostering this (these) good habits

    repeated usage of words ( society, philanthropist etc. , try to use synonyms)

    Lack of dependent clauses , hence complex structures.

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