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  • Falak

    July 17, 2022 at 6:41 PM

    should take for (to) mitigate the problem.

    raised as a side effect of (this) growth.

    For instance (like) , ageing inhabitants creating huge financial burden to the country.

    Additionally (hence), they are not able to concentrate over work and explore their capabilities to do extra


    In addition to that(,) immigration process can be made easy

    For example(,) many developed

    issue in (to) some extend (extent)

    Use cohesive devices carefully and be cautious with punctuation marks.

    Keep writing!!

    band: 4/6

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