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  • Falak

    August 16, 2022 at 12:27 PM

    Feedback : Great improvement in terms of sentence formation and cohesion.

    One thing which is quite noticeable is almost every other sentence is starting with ” when….” . In order to make complex structure there is great variety of subordinating structures , make use of them.

    Keep it up!!

    Band: 4/6

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