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  • Falak

    September 2, 2022 at 12:20 AM

    economically developing (developed) nations

    These (This) essay

    which is causing a delay in (the growth of these countries) order to progress these countries.

    but when is the time (the time comes) to give back

    repeated usage of words ( insecurity, skilled,

    (and thus, there will be no need )they no need to depend on other rich countries.

    employees (should also be revised) also should be revised to make it more employee (supportive working culture) friendly environment.- need to avoid repetitive usage of words.

    more and more migration of skilled manpower from developing countries to developed countries are (is) causing serious problems

    Feedback : Need to work on lexical resources

    Band: 3.5/6

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