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economically developing (developed) nations
These (This) essay
which is causing a delay in (the growth of these countries) order to progress these countries.
but when is the time (the time comes) to give back
repeated usage of words ( insecurity, skilled,
(and thus, there will be no need )they no need to depend on other rich countries.
employees (should also be revised) also should be revised to make it more employee (supportive working culture) friendly environment.- need to avoid repetitive usage of words.
more and more migration of skilled manpower from developing countries to developed countries are (is) causing serious problems
Feedback : Need to work on lexical resources
Band: 3.5/6
