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This essay analyses both positive and negative impact Climate Change has on Businesses. (along with my opinion)
unit located in (on) the Island
there are great deal(s) of interest
Thus, Climate change have (has) lead (led) to new business opportunities.
In conclusion, I advise to state your opinion with better affirmation
words like ( climate change, business are repetitive )
Keep writing!!
Band: 4/6