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paragraphing should be done properly
Introduction is not highlighting about solutions
south asian (South Asian) countries and african (African) countries
migrants are unwilingy to (willingly ) leave their motherland
better salary especially in (“in” is redundant) doctors and teachers.
economoy (economy)
equipments who (which) are purchased by other
to run his (their) family
which is an identifiation (identification) for their.(?)
First body paragraph talks about causes while the question is about “effects”, hence B.P 1 is off the track .
Kindly be cautious with the points mentioned above.
Band : 2.5/6
Keep writing!!
