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  • Falak

    September 6, 2022 at 6:26 AM

    paragraphing should be done properly

    Introduction is not highlighting about solutions

    south asian (South Asian) countries and african (African) countries

    migrants are unwilingy to (willingly ) leave their motherland

    better salary especially in (“in” is redundant) doctors and teachers.

    economoy (economy)

    equipments who (which) are purchased by other

    to run his (their) family

    which is an identifiation (identification) for their.(?)

    First body paragraph talks about causes while the question is about “effects”, hence B.P 1 is off the track .

    Kindly be cautious with the points mentioned above.

    Band : 2.5/6

    Keep writing!!

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