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    Jasmeet

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    August 13, 2021 at 10:43 AM in reply to: GT Letter Writing Task 1: Formal Letter

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I would like to extend my gratitude for the exclusive preparations done by your staff members for the meeting of our company throughout the day. Each one present there were facilitated by the wonderful arrangements except the food. I am writing this letter to complain about the lunch served at the Taj hotel on the 23<sup>rd</sup> of April.

    After the feedback was taken from the participants of the meeting held in your premises, I came to know that facilities were superb, and staff was humble and polite in providing their services. The meeting area was clean and tidy, and temperature was perfect for the all day discussion. The valet parking facility was very useful in saving time of the members.

    When it came to the food, although there were few items that tasted very delicious but most of them were not up to the mark. They were not properly cooked and looked like made in a hurry and prepared by some amateur cooks. Moreover, the rice was overcooked whereas chicken was under. It was not matching their expectations as hotel Taj is well known for your best food in the town.

    To keep your reputation, it is very important to take measures towards improving the quality of food as it may hamper your growth and fame in the future. It would be great if you ask you ask your cooks to taste the food before serving.

    I hope the kind of food served will not be repeated and my feedback will help you in getting better in the future.

    Yours faithfully,

    Jasmeet Kaur

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    Jasmeet

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    August 11, 2021 at 11:00 AM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: Positive or Negative Development Essay

    These days it is so very possible for people to get all the products of their choice from anywhere in the world which in turn is making all the countries more and more similar globally. In my opinion this has turned into a positive development as people can access the products or services being anywhere in the world with any compromises making their life more comfortable.

    People can access international products like Apple, Samsung, Nike and many more from anywhere in the world resulting into various choices and preferences which fosters the growth and development of different nations. It also helps in bridging the gap between countries in the way that people from different borders come together, for instance in a Chinese restaurant, they get to meet other people, get to know their thoughts and ideas which brings them together avoiding various barriers and differences. More the similarities in nations would bring more growth and development in a country.

    On the other hand, with a wide variety of global products available to each one also put a pressure on the producers to make the quality products available to their consumers instead of just focusing on the quantity. It brings awareness among the consumers as they are already aware of the different products so there are less chances of cheating and fraud on the name of fake or duplicate products. Moreover, the quality products and services provided by the producers sometimes get recognized by the international market and it help them expanding their business globally. For instance, Ferns and Petals was a small company which used to deliver products in India on the special occasions, and with its prompt and error free service it has now expanded its business to several other countries in a short span of two years.

    In conclusion, the globalization has made peoples’ life more luxurious and comfortable than in the past and with this it is fostering the growth of underdeveloped and developing nations.

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    Jasmeet

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    August 5, 2021 at 9:55 PM in reply to: GT TASK 1: LETTER WRITING

    Hi Neha,

    I hope this letter finds you and your family in healthy conditions. I reached safely at my place. I really enjoyed the vacation with you guys. I am writing to thank for the holiday and to request you for the wallet I left at your home.

    I would really appreciate your idea of vacation at Goa, and I believe it was the best time of ours since we got busy in our professional lives just after college. At first, it seems merely a dream but after coming home is such a rejuvenating experience. Although it’s an arduous task to get time for holiday from our hectic schedule, I would prefer to more such kind of vacations.

    I would like to tell you that I forgot my wallet in your wardrobe I kept for safety purposes as I thought I may lose it if kept here and there. When I reached my home, I just realized that I forget to carry wallet in hurry as I was packing my stuff.

    I would request you to send the wallet through courier service as it contains some important documents, and I may need them soon. You can send it on my home address I mostly have to travel in the city for my office work.

    Hoping to hear from you soon. Take care and stay safe.

    With love,

    Jasmeet

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    Jasmeet

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    August 4, 2021 at 10:50 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2 agree or disagree (too many choices)

    In the past, people were not given plenty of choices to decide from but these days we are blessed with many of them. I completely agree with the statement that we have so many options to choose the best for us.

    To begin with, starting from our food, clothes, TV channels and different products we use in our daily life, we have immense range of options to choose from. In the past they were restricted to just few of them. The advent of technology and globalization has made it possible for everyone to decide from infinite options whereas in the past, people were confined only to local products or products nearby whereas now they are just a click away, for instance, an Indian can directly order the product he likes from USA using their website and paying money through online portal.

    On the other hand, having too many choices to select from put a person in dilemma and they are often spoiled with them. It has increased the cost of living as each one in the family has different preferences and they go for theirs. They sometimes end up choosing the wrong option as there are so many choices in the education field too. More the number of choices, more would be the confusion to select the best one.

    To conclude, as most of the people lack necessities one should wisely choose the product from the different choices keeping in mind various factors like time, money and usage. We must focus on prioritizing our real needs and make a right choice from the diverse option available.

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    Jasmeet

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    August 4, 2021 at 10:04 AM in reply to:

    Dear Mr. Jones,

    I am writing this letter to request you to allow me to work at our company’s headquarters in Alberta, Canada for the next six months. I will be of immense help after

    My most of the clients reside there and I will be able to help them more personally if I stay there and carry on my task. Moreover, the team is working on a project based on cutting edges which will be of great support if we would implement that in our company as well. I already have worked in each department of ours and would like to extend my knowledge in this field which ultimately will be significant for our company’s growth.

    The project we are working on has been finished by me and rest of the part will be covered by my other team members. Also Mrs. Smith, my colleague has assisted me each time in the past, so I will collaborate with her to get all the task done and on weekends I will be able to manage sufficient time for my work.

    I would be greatly obliged if you could arrange my accommodation in the company’s guest house in Alberta and talk to our seniors regarding my stay as this is once in a lifetime opportunity for me and I do not want to let it go off.

    I am looking forward to a positive response. Thanks for your help and support.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Jasmeet

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    Jasmeet

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    August 3, 2021 at 11:20 PM in reply to:

    Dear Komal,

    Hope this letter find you and your family in good and healthy condition. It’s been so long we had a conversation. I am writing this letter as I came across a local newspaper advertisement regarding a work opportunity you were looking for so long.

    The job involves handling cash and various other cash instruments in a leading bank called HDFC. It also includes all the work carried out in a normal back along with managing cash.

    The bank wants someone who is perfect command over English so I believe this work would be suitable for you as you possess all the necessary qualification and experience in this industry along with flawless conversation skills as the work involves a lot of interaction with their valuable customers on their banking details who prefer to speak only English language.

    I am sending you the page of newspaper which has each minute detail of requirement for this job. you can apply for this job through the website portal mentioned in the advertisement.

    If you have any query regarding this job, feel free to contact me. Hope to hear from you soon.

    All the best,

    Jasmeet

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    Jasmeet

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    August 3, 2021 at 10:58 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2

    A lot of people consider cleanliness at home or workplace an important task along with other household chores and professional work. A place where you reside or work for couple of hours needs to be neat and tidy in my opinion. Fresh and clear ideas come to our mind and the task get easily completed when the place not stuffed with useless things.

    Cleanliness at home or office is an important aspect to get the things done in quick and efficient manner. It reveals a lot about the person about his personality and character. When the things would be at their place, it would become easy for the other person to locate the things and task can be done in no time.

    It also inculcates a habit of neatness in children as they grasp and learn things quiet easily by watching the adults. This way they also learn to keep their toys in an arranged manner. Having clean surroundings also ensure less diseases as most of them outbreaks in dirty places.

    These days as lot of people are either working from home or using online platform, the scattered things at one’s desk or backyard may distract others which may not result into being a better professional. Places having mess around them doesn’t allow a person to think of some fresh ideas to put into their profession as they may distract them. So, more the cleanliness, higher the chances of efficient work.

    To conclude, there are several benefits one can avail while keeping their house and workplace clean and tidy. If each one of us adapt to this habit, the chances of accomplishing task on time and better evaluation would increase.

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    Jasmeet

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    August 3, 2021 at 10:30 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2

    It becomes very difficult to live in a foreign country when you must speak their native language as it can lead to various social as well as practical problems. I completely agree with the statement as it can act as a barrier to communication and problems like finding a job.

    The people migrating to foreign lands find themselves in a problematic situation when they cannot speak and converse in their home language as it does not enable them to understand their culture and traditions. Sometimes, it may lead to miscommunication of thoughts and ideas which further may result into social crisis or racism. In this way, they feel neglected and discriminated from others. For instance, it becomes very difficult for an Indian to live in London when he does not have inkling regarding their native language.

    Moreover, it becomes an arduous task for immigrants to find a job at overseas. In this case, even employers do not prefer selecting them as they deprive of basic knowledge about their native language. They even fail to read the important notices, understand their rules and regulations. Migrants sometimes can’t even order food online with this issue. Less the knowledge of foreign language, more they suffer and manage to survive.

    To conclude, people moving to foreign countries must learn the basics of their language before entering as it will ease their task and help in finding them a job and ask for help of citizens if they are in need which may result in avoiding various social and practical problems.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 29, 2021 at 9:23 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2

    The trash from home which goes for recycling is not sufficient according to some people. The only way which can double this process is that authorities should make it a legal obligation which will force people to recycle more of their waste. In my opinion, there is a great need of laws to make them aware about the reusable process and specify severe punishments to ensure proper recycling.

    To begin this, people should be made aware of avoiding certain things like use of plastic bags. They should be encouraged to use paper bags or bags made from cloth fabric. Also, it is the foremost responsibility of people to separate the waste into recycle and non- recycle and dump them in different bins. However, not many individuals are into the habit of recycling waste. This may be due to the negligence or lack of time.

    A new recycling law will ensure that enough waste is getting recycled because people are very careless about their waste management. People will abide by the rules only if there would be certain laws pertaining to that and from the concern of punishment or fine. For instance, people merely used to follow traffic rules in the past, however, with the strict fines and punishment, they have started following them and do not dare to cross the red light these days. Similarly, if the authorities start penalizing the defaulters, people will start this process out of fear. Government should also come up with idea of rewarding people for their extra efforts and for less waste produced by them.

    In conclusion, government should install large number of different bins at public places and ensure people abiding by the rules. More of advertisements related to this should be shown on television and radio. Children at school should be taught about the recycling process and how it can save our environment.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 27, 2021 at 10:04 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY

    There is no doubt that without money survival is difficult, but it would be wrong to say that money is the most crucial factor in stimulating happiness. In my opinion, people can live their life joyfully without deep pockets. Job satisfaction and family support are the different reasons which brings happiness.

    Money cannot define one’s happiness. It is not necessary that people with lot of money are always happy as they might always be in fear of losing that money. The actual happiness comes from within the soul. The more the money, higher the social insecurity. People can live a happy and healthy life even if they don’t have adequate financial resources. For instance, people in developing countries enjoys stronger family bonds and simple life as compared to the developed nations.

    Other factors which contribute happiness are job satisfaction, family support and helping each other in need. No matter how much the salary is, if a person is not satisfied with the task he is performing, he can’t be defined as a happy man. In addition to this, the role of caring and loving family plays a vital role in the person’s life. For instance, if something is earning enough for himself and he doesn’t have his family around due to some issues, he won’t be happy either in that case. Lastly, some people find their real happiness in helping others in need. They feel a sense of satisfaction and peace of mind.

    In conclusion, money can off course bring happiness but for shorter period, for long lasting happiness job satisfaction and family are of paramount importance. One can cheerfully live his life if judiciously spend his capital.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 27, 2021 at 2:37 PM in reply to: GT TASK 1: LETTER WRITING- COMPLAINT LETTER

    Dear Sir/Madam,

    I am writing this letter to complain about a wireless mouse that I bought from your store last week. I hope you would replace it immediately.

    The Logitech mouse I purchased from your shop in Karol Bagh dated 29<sup>th</sup> June has got lot of issues just after using two days. It does not function properly and frequently gets disconnected from the laptop. I had to connect it multiple times throughout the day to carry out my work. In addition to this, red LED which emits light gets dim after connecting with the device.

    I work from home as I have a two year old kid to take care so it becomes very difficult to carry out my office work smoothly due to frequent interruption that mouse causes. I am working on have several projects and to meet deadline it is very important to have uninterrupted service as my task gets delayed and most of the time is wasted in connecting to the device.

    I need to get this mouse issues fixed at the earliest in order to carry out my task without any trouble. I would request you either replace the item with a new one or repair the same in next two days time.

    I am sending the purchase receipt of the mouse for your perusal and hope to hear you on this matter at the earliest.

    Yours faithfully,

    Jasmeet Kaur

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    Jasmeet

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    July 26, 2021 at 9:41 PM in reply to: GT TASK 1: LETTER WRITING

    Dear Madam,

    After having seen your advertisement in Citylight magazine of July edition, I am writing this letter to apply for the job of child care.

    I belong to Melbourne city of Australia and my husband had to shift to India for one of the projects that will last for next six months. Since I am alone at home and have enough experience in taking care of children, I would like to give my name for the post of child-care.

    I have done my training in the day-care course and was looking after 3 kids in Melbourne city in my previous job. I have got sufficient experience of handling kids and managing them while their parent’s absence. In addition to this, I am pretty hard working and sincere and adhere to the instructions given by the guardians. My experience will surely help me fulfilling my duty in a better manner.

    I have great passion for baking cakes and cookies and in my spare time I love to follow my heart. Also I also love to shop and collect antique things for my home. I feel I can do this better being part of your family as child care worker.

    In case of any query you can contact me on my mobile number that is 9876554322. I am looking forward to hearing from you.


    Yours faithfully,

    Jasmeet Kaur

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    Jasmeet

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    July 23, 2021 at 2:43 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: AGREE DISAGREE ESSAY

    It is argued that the rapid increase in the number of obese people is putting a stress on the health care system to cope with the health related issues. According to some people, the finest way to deal with obesity is to bring in more lessons on physical education in the school syllabus. I completely agree that introducing them will have a positive impact on the health of students as well as it will send the message of fitness to their parents.

    Physical education plays an important role in living a healthy life. The lessons introduced at a young age teaches long-life morals. The children learn to create a balance between their studies and physical activities, therefore it brings a change in their lifestyle and builds physical confidence. Moreover, they become less prone to chronic and severe diseases. For instance, it is found that students who were engaged in physical activities were healthier than their fellows in the adulthood.

    There are limited resources with every government of the country, so it becomes difficult for them to install the facilities with the help of modest means. The growing number of patients has put a stress on the health care system in a way that there is a need for more hospitals, doctors and medical equipment. The more the number of obese people, higher the demand of resources to fulfill the medical needs. Therefore, it becomes a mammoth task for any authority to shift the allocated funds. In such conditions, physical education aids in making people aware of adverse effects.

    In conclusion, more of exercises and other activities should be taught as a part of school curriculum which will help people in living a healthy lifestyle free from ailments and severe diseases.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 22, 2021 at 2:58 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- DISCUSSION ESSAY

    Many people believe that getting a qualification is necessary to get a better placement whereas others think that having work experience and key soft skills are more important in the job. I believe that university education is very essential to get into a good career.

    To begin with, majority of people think that getting better opportunities for a better career entirely depends on the one’s degree. Employers are interviewing people on the basis of different qualifications they possess. The higher the degree, more will be chances of getting selected. For instance, doctor or teachers can be appointed as per the eligibility criteria. For more clarity, a doctor cannot be offered a job without MBBS degree in India.

    On the other hand, some believe that having enough experience and soft skills are more important to get into better profession. Many organizations hire people based on their previous experience which reduces the training cost and time therefore, result into better performance as the work is being accomplished by trained professional. For instance, from a list of candidates who appeared for the interview of a marketing job, employer will go for a person who has got the soft skills and major experience.

    In my opinion, one should complete the university education as communications skills and interpersonal skills are part of their curriculum and one gets to learn these as part of their studies. These skills play a vital role to get a good job.

    In conclusion, better placement opportunity requires a relevant education background. Also the values and knowledge imparted by the institutions will always benefit our career.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 21, 2021 at 6:46 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: POSITIVE NEGATIVE ESSAY QUESTION

    With the increasing popularity of internet, many people are spending most of their time socializing online instead of having face to face interaction these days. In my opinion this is a sign of negative development as it indicates fear of facing the reality and lack of confidence.

    The main negative impact of contacting people online is that confidence level becomes low, and it leads to fear and shyness. People hesitate to interact in real and as a result they keep themselves busy in the virtual world. Due to less communication with those who lives with them and nearby, the personal and social life also gets affected. Secondly, people become prey to the plethora of fake accounts by sharing their personal details on the web which sometimes result into blackmailing and cheating, therefore, living a stressful and depressed life.

    Another aspect of online interaction is leading to various health related problems. Obesity has become a great concern these days in youngsters due to constant and long hours sitting on computers. Other issues which are encountered by people are eye strain and back pain which may affect their performance at work. For instance, number of youngsters are becoming fat due to the lack of physical activity and sedentary lifestyle.

    In conclusion, socializing through online platform has many consequences such as cheating, blackmailing and depressed life which leads to negative development of a person. Hence, the judicial use of social websites and regular monitoring by parents is necessary for the betterment of individual as well as society.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 20, 2021 at 4:00 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay

    There is no doubt that social platforms like Facebook, Instagram and Twitter have enormous and adverse effects on both individuals and society. I completely agree that with the advent of these social networking sites there is a huge risk of cyber-crimes and personal information being leaked.

    To begin with, the threat of cyber crimes these days have become a serious issue. A lot of users selling the items through Facebook and Instagram tends to steal the hard-earned money of the people. Also, the personal data is at risk when it is shared on these sites. Hackers copy the information to use them to create separate social accounts. In addition to, people are getting addicted becoming internet worm. The sedentary lifestyle followed by them is the reason for various health related problems such as eye strain and obesity. People waste many hours on their smart phones and computers, gradually effecting their performance at the work.

    Furthermore, the effects of social media can be seen on society also in the way that people end up making hundreds and thousands of friends on the internet, but they do not have time to visit and talk to those who are sitting next to them. They are busy making fake friends and no idea about the real world around them. Consequently, no close and supportive relationships. Our society has a whole is scattering as everyone is busy with online friends whom they never had met face to face or in the near future.

    In conclusion, although Facebook and other sites are beneficial to some extent, I strongly agree that they have had a huge negative impact on individual and society. People should spend more time talking to their close and near ones and utilize their precious time more wisely.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 19, 2021 at 9:54 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Most of the people have in their mind that English will become the only spoken language slowly and gradually with the growth of tourism as it has contributed to it becoming the most eminent language in the world. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of having one universal language in the whole world.

    English language becoming the global language will reap many benefits. There would be no discrimination on the basis of language. As a result, everyone would be treated equally. There would be least chances of miscommunication which will enhance better understanding among people. For instance, an Indian can freely speak to a person in USA which will rather improve inter-country relationship too. There would be no separate courses people had to opt for being bilingual as it would be no longer needed. Speaking one language will make the person comfortable to deal with different people in several countries.

    The major disadvantages of having one language worldwide will result into loss of native language and their mother tongue and subsequently the loss of their culture. People will loss their native language, their mother tongue. There would be no separate identity of people belonging to particular region. This would in turn will have dire consequences on tourism industry as there would be no point of travel if everyone have same culture and language.

    However there are some advantages of English being the only language, but having local and regional language is must to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations. Therefore, it would be beneficial to speak one’s native language.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 18, 2021 at 5:46 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- CRIME SOLUTION ESSAY

    After completing their first punishment, most of the culprits tends to repeat more offences. This can mainly be due to the lack of serious penalty. In this essay the causes behind this serious issue and several measures that can help the authorities solve this problem will be discussed.

    To begin with the first reason that the offenders are committing more crimes is the lack of severe punishment, as a result of which, it is taken more casually by the criminals. In addition to this, when different people are locked up in one prison, they do not have anything to do apart from chit-chat, however, end up sharing their information and some of them even provoke them to take their revenges. Furthermore, after being released when they are faced by the society, the ignorance and unemployment again encourage them to do the same.

    There is a great need to solve this problem so that criminals stay away from more crimes. More rehabilitation centers should be offered by the government wherein the criminals are taught and made to learn new skills which will help them find a job. Regular check and supervision on offenders after coming out of prisons will alert and prevent them taking any further action towards crime. More and more work should be assigned to the prisoners in jail which will keep them busy and get less time to talk to other criminals.

    In conclusion, if proper training in prisons is provided and continuous check is kept while coming out for the first time, the numbers of crimes will eventually be decreased.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 21, 2021 at 9:32 PM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -10 (Global Problems)

    As the world is changing rapidly, all the countries are going to face different challenges like poverty, pollution, lack of education, as well as environmental issues. By next decade, my country India too will fight for major issues that are population explosion, illiteracy and environmental problems. I will brief these issues and their possible solutions in this essay.

    India is a home to more than 1.39 billion people and it will cross the China’s total population in the next ten years becoming most populated country in the world. It is country with limited resources so large percentage will suffer from poverty and illiteracy. Lack of education will be the key reason for unemployment. The increasing population will lead to more construction of houses instead of crops on the cultivated lands resulting into different types of pollution. Everything is inter connected and this will break into devastating environmental issues like deforestation, depletion of natural resources etc.

    To overcome these problems, one possible solution is to implement one-child policy which will have a significant control over population. Government should make arrangements to encourage children by providing basic education free of cost and by providing free meals. Increase in literacy rate will help the country economically. People in India should be strictly fined against using paper, wastage of water and electricity. More practices like replacing the disposal items with reusable items, recycling waste should be encouraged by politicians in their respective areas instead of other political activities like rallies.

    The strict actions taken by the government will surely help India overcome these issues slowly and gradually. Everyone in the country including its citizens and local authorities should participate and contribute to eliminate the problem of population, illiteracy and environment.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 21, 2021 at 9:44 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -7 (Outdoor Activities)

    It is often argued by some people that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. I completely agree with the given statement. The following essay will discuss the benefits of outdoor activities over indoor games played by the children.

    Outdoor activities provide a conducive environment for maintaining good health and strength. Naturally Vitamin D is absorbed by the youngsters when are out. It fosters the process of metabolism and digestion whereas the indoor games negatively impact the moral development of a child and they become complacent towards their health. It also enhances their mental health. The more they will utilize their time outside playing with friends the more they will learn social skills, engaging in different activities will help them to learn sharing skills too which will surely help them in future.

    On the other hand, the indoor games played by the youngsters are more susceptible to certain illness than adults are. The more time engaging in indoor activities is one of the key reason pupils are suffering from obesity these days. Computer games may be responsible for children’s abysmal performance in school. For example, children spending ample time on screen are unable to focus on their studies in school due to various health issues which include eyes strain, back pain, being lethargic.

    All in all, parents play a vital role in their child’s health. Spending time with them in outdoor games and making them understand the importance will surely encourage them as children’s minds are malleable.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 15, 2021 at 10:46 AM in reply to: Prevention is better than cure-Opinion Essay Question

    Health is wealth. The way people look after their wealth should be implemented onto our health also. It is always better to take care of things in the prior stage which can worse later on. In this essay, I will be true to the statement that yes, ” Prevention is better than care.” using few examples.

    From our upbringing, it is always taught to us to take care of our health in numerous ways. For example, our mother keeps on asking us to wear warm clothes in winters, take umbrella in rainy season if going out. That is the first step taken to prevent any illness. In the same way, in this coronavirus pandemic, government is laying efforts to educate and warn the people of their country by asking them to wear masks if stepping out, to keep social distance, sanitizing and washing hands frequently to prevent getting sick from Covid 19 as the cure turns out very costly.

    The government should educate the people regarding all the preventive measures in the rural as well as slum areas where most of the diseases originate due to lack of knowledge. For example, avoiding smoking can prevent cancer, less sweet eatables can prevent diabetes. The more of parks should be constructed, playgrounds which can influence the people to do exercise and keep themselves fit and healthy. All this can be possible if more of funds would be invested and a certain budget should be allocated by the government.

    I would like to conclude by saying that better to avoid illness than to find ways to get rid of it as the treating and researching cost may be too higher that people end up spending their everything and left with nothing. Hence, more of health education should be provided to citizens by government as a part of their school curriculum to children, on the TV, radio shows etc.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 11, 2021 at 10:09 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing -9 (Foreign Language)

    Learning a foreign language fuels one’s intelligence and makes their job prospects brighter. People have learning advantage. There are numerous ways to learn a foreign language. In this essay I will discuss about three ways with their merits and demerits at the same time.

    To practice on your own is the first and easiest way to adapt a foreign language and this can be the most self reliant way to learn language with economic benefits. “Practice makes the man perfect” is apt for this way of getting into alien language. However, there may be chances of going on wrong track as no one is there to guide as well as rectify the mistakes. This may discourage self study method.

    Secondly, taking lessons as part of a class can also be considered as one of the best ways. The more we get to interact with our peers and teachers, the more we learn. Number of group activities to make people learn can be more fruitful as they get to know each other also can learn various other native language of different people learning at the same time. Lack of personal attention and demotivation can be disadvantage of this type of learning. Due to number of students in class can be the reason that people are not able to concentrate and therefore, learn.

    The third way of swotting the external language can be taking lessons online. Learning the things from the comfort of your home or anywhere we want can be super advantageous for those who are unable to commute or are in remote locations. It brings the economical benefits along but fault at few points like, lack of practical knowledge and face to face communication.

    In conclusion, I would say each of the strategy is truly advantageous. Pure determination can surely help in achieving the desired goal. Otherwise taking lessons as part of the class is most effective according to me.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 8, 2021 at 10:37 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 4 (Crimes)

    Committing crime has become a serious problem for the country along with other major issues like poverty, unemployment etc. Giving longer period of prison sentence is favoured by some people while some of them believes that the criminals can be given better alternatives as a punishment. This essay will elaborate both the ways of reducing crime whereas I believe in giving them long stay in prisons.

    There are very serious crimes people are committing like robbery, rape, chain snatching, drug supply etc. These people should be given very strict punishment so that they do not think of doing it again. Unemployment can be the reason folks are doing the crime whereas in some cases there are few devils who are earning well but still engage in criminal activities like rape, so proving them education or some other facility becomes irrelevant here. If the government already preset the punishment of the crimes and adhere to them strictly the person will not do that thinking about the consequences. For example: there is life time imprisonment if the person is indulged in any drug related crime in UAE.

    On the other side, providing employment opportunities, educating people can be helpful in the reduction of crimes in few scenarios. The country will be developed if number of people will be well educated and they would have enough earnings to fulfill their basic needs.

    In conclusion I would say that the fear of punishment in the respective minds can discourage and reduce the rate of transgression. This is far better option than educating and providing enough employment platforms to make people busy in their livelihood.

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    Jasmeet

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    June 3, 2021 at 11:49 AM in reply to: IELTS Letter Writing -2

    Dear Komal,

    Hi there, I hope you are enjoying the new place after your marriage in Udaipur. I heard it has beautiful monuments, lakes and artistic works as you already are fond of them.

    I have a good news to tell you that we just bought a beautiful house in Jaipur and my father has planned to organize a house-warming ceremony for all our relatives and close friends. You surely have to attend the ceremony.

    After the rituals of house-warming in the morning, the party will be organized in the evening in the Hotel Ginger near our new residence and the address is enclosed with the letter for your convenience. You can directly hire a taxi or board the bus to reach the Jaipur. I will pick you up from the Jaipur bus stop and then we both will head to our home in our car. In case of any problem reaching here, do text me.

    I really want you to be a part of this celebration. We’ll gonna have lot of fun. I would really appreciate if you could come prior to one day.

    Well, let me finish here. I am eagerly waiting for your reply to this letter.

    See you,

    Jasmeet

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    Jasmeet

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    June 3, 2021 at 10:26 AM in reply to: IELTS Essay Writing – 6 (Wasting money on the arts)

    The decision of utilizing money for the development of the country lies in the hand of the government of the country. I would partially disagree with the statement that government is wasting money on the arts as culture and traditions play an important role in the betterment of the country.

    The money used on the artistic things or to preserve the ancient art cannot be called as waste. Art is considered as the heritage and history of the country so spending money to preserve and take care of those things stimulates economic growth. The citizens of the country learn about their history and culture through various types of arts. It help the people to connect to their traditions being followed since thousands of years back. There are lot of examples in India like The Golden temple, Amritsar and The Taj Mahal in Agra where every year lot of expenditure is done to preserve the beauty of these places as tourists from all over the world visit these places. Tourists visiting historical places, monuments and museums which holds the ancient history of any country contributes to economic growth of the country in many ways.

    Some people are fond of artistic things that they are mostly involved in the activities like crafts, movies etc. They find a sense of satisfaction and it contributes to their mental health as well. The step of encouraging arts will be beneficial for the people as it will help them in stress management.

    On the other hand, the people thinking that government should invest the proceeds collected from the taxes and fines for the development of the country cannot be neglected. The people starving, the ones who are fighting for employment in the underdeveloped country as well as developing countries should also be taken into account. The government should be able to eradicate these most severe problems and not leaving behind the art preservation.

    In conclusion, I would say that the portion of expenditure should be fixed by the government so that none of the areas are neglected as there is need to look after the historic places and monuments which are deteriorating with time. The development should include all spheres of the country. Everything should come into consideration when finalizing the budget for each sector.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 23, 2021 at 2:53 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- DISCUSSION ESSAY

    Will surely take into account.

    Thanks for the feedback.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 22, 2021 at 5:15 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: POSITIVE NEGATIVE ESSAY QUESTION

    Thank you mam

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    Jasmeet

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    July 21, 2021 at 9:47 AM in reply to: Writing Task 2- Opinion Essay

    Thanks for the feedback mam, I will surely work upon it.

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    Jasmeet

    Member
    July 20, 2021 at 3:03 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- ADVANTAGE DISADVANTAGE ESSAY

    Some of the people have in their mind that English will become the only spoken language slowly and gradually with the growth of tourism as it has contributed to it becoming the most prominent language globally. Having one language will certainly aid understanding and economic growth but there will also be some drawbacks.

    Having one global language will surely reap many benefits. There would be no discrimination based on language. As a result, everyone would be treated equally. There would be less chances of miscommunication which will enhance better understanding among people. For instance, an Indian can freely speak to a person in USA which will rather improve international relationship too. Speaking one language will make the person comfortable to deal with different people in several countries. Also, there would be no separate courses that people have to opt for being bilingual as it would be no longer needed. The lesser the number of languages, the more effective would be the communication.

    The major disadvantages of having one language worldwide will result in the lose of native language and their mother tongue and subsequently the lose of their culture. Their native language and mother tongue will become extinct with the time. There would be no separate identity of people belonging to a particular region. This would in turn will have dire consequences on tourism industry as there would be no point of travel if everyone has same culture and language. The richness of the world civilizations comes from variety of languages.

    To conclude, there are some advantages of English being the only language, but having local and regional language is must to ensure a rich world heritage for future generations. Therefore, it would be beneficial to speak one’s native language.

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    Jasmeet

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    July 19, 2021 at 5:36 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2- CRIME SOLUTION ESSAY

    Thank you mam. I will surely work on it.

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