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    November 18, 2021 at 7:46 PM in reply to: Task 2 essay – Private Tutors

    Nowadays private tutors are being employed by many parents to teach their children after school hours. In my opinion, hiring private tutors to teach children is a good practice.

    A child needs good guidance to be good at a particular subject or field. Schools have abundance of children and it becomes very difficult for a school teacher to focus on a particular child. Due to this many children perform poorly in their academics. Parents usually hire a private tutor to overcome this problem. For example, there was an article published in The Tribune which states that 90 percent of the students passed in their exams after hiring a private tutor. Not only did they pass but performed well in their examinations.

    The World is vast and everything can’t be taught in schools. Music, sports and swimming are examples of such subjects which are not at schools. Many great personalities in these fields had private tutors. Without their help the child’s talent would have been lost. For an instance, Jurgen had a private tutor teaching him how to play football and afterwards he became one of the great sporting icon. He had talent from a young age but with the help of tutor he did much better. Tutor helped in rectifying Jurgens’ mistakes. Jurgen never had a school teacher who taught him like a friend but his private tutor became his pal.

    To conclude, private tutors can teach a variety of subjects and especially the ones in which the child shows interest in. The child gets much deeper understanding of the field when taught at personal level.

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    November 18, 2021 at 11:58 AM in reply to: Discuss both views – [Doctors in rural areas]

    In some countries, people say that newly graduated teachers and doctors should be posted in rural areas because of less medical and educational facilities there, while others believe that people should have the freedom to work where they want to. Both sides have pros and cons which we will discuss in this essay. In my opinion, people should have the freedom to choose wherever they want to work.

    People living in rural areas have the right for best medical facilities. As there are very few people willing to work in these backward areas, there is need of good doctors and teachers there. According to me, people should be sent only for a limited amount of time to work in these areas. The graduates should not feel complete cutoff from the developed world which can have adverse effects on their mental health. For example, one of my friends after graduating from a prestigious college was posted in a rural area where he felt lonely and committed suicide.

    It takes a lot of time and effort to graduate in a particular field and people graduating have their own aspirations and goals in life. Some people want to stay with their family and others want to explore a particular city. If a person has worked hard to work in his/her dream city, it should not be snatched away. This can have an adverse effect on their upcoming generation. For example, a colleague of mine was posted in a village and in a year he was blessed with a son. As his son matured, he made friends with the boys in the village and became a gangster which completely ruined their family.

    To conclude, people graduating should have the freedom to choose where they want to work as many lives are attached to them.

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    November 8, 2021 at 9:58 PM in reply to: Advantages – Globalization

    It is becoming more difficult in modern era to tell the difference between different countries as people wear same
    fashioned clothes, watch the same tv channels, use the same brands, have similar kind of food eating habits. This
    essay will argue that advantages of globalization outweighs the disadvantages.

    As the world is more connected than ever before, humans try to follow the hottest trend across the globe. This kind of trend following is leading to modernization across different countries. Humans have been taught to choose the best option possible in a certain situation then why not choose from across the globe than to choose from their own country. People take inspiration from different kind of leaders across the world. They wear the same brands of clothes because they are the best options available in the brands category in the whole world. For example, If I have to choose between wearing a Nike shirt or some localized brand shirt which comes with the same price tag, I would obviously go for Nike. Following same kind of eating habit is not a problem as long as it is the best eating habit there is.

    Globalization has negative impact in certain aspects. It leads to comparison between different races which leads to anxiety among people. Children wanting to buy expensive branded things because their friends are doing so which leads to fight with their parents. Watching adult content which is common in foreign tv series can leave permanent effect on child’s brain.

    On a whole, Globalizations positive impact weighs much more than its negative impact. It is needed for the whole world to be a better place. It is beneficial for the whole world to have a choice from the best there exists.

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    October 26, 2021 at 12:07 PM in reply to: Discuss both views – [Children Spending Time Alone]

    According to data collected from survey some people have given an answer
    that children should be encouraged by their parents to take part in
    organized group activities in their spare time and the rest have said
    that it is a good learning curve for children to occupy themselves on their
    own. This essay will portray both the views and what my thought process
    says.

    Some children need to fill gaps in their personality like knowing how
    to do team work, having spirit of sportsmanship. These children should be encouraged to take part in group
    activities. Other children want to find what they really enjoy doing
    in their free time and should be left on their own.
    In Group activities we can learn from others but it is good for only those
    that can take advantage of it and children left on their own should also make the most of it. Parents should not force things onto their children and have communication at a regular basis.

    My thought process says that children should be left on their own to
    explore what they like in their free time. As they are already taking
    part in group activities at school. Being on their own teaches them how
    to become independent and it builds strong intuition. Before the world of internet
    it was impossible to play a game of chess on our own but now one can play
    against the computer. There are many other things that internet has made
    possible. In group activities there is chance of child’s voice getting suppressed and bad company can
    lead to disastrous results. Children should work on their own ideas in
    their spare time and try to find like minded to work on the idea.
    Parents should have a watch on them so that they
    don’t go in the wrong direction.

    To conclude, there are pros and cons to both the sides and it
    completely depends on the child’s mental state but
    according to me they should be left on their own in their spare time
    so that they can explore their ideas.

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    October 25, 2021 at 11:17 AM in reply to: Opinion Essay – Space Travel

    A lot of money is being spent by developed nations in order to
    explore space and find something valuable but most of the times this
    money goes to waste. In my opinion, leaders of developed nations
    should not spend huge amount of money to do so and this essay
    will try to explain the same.

    I think developed nations use funds collected from the citizens of that
    nation and use that money for space exploration, Although it can be put
    to better use. These nations have been exploring space from the past few
    decades and the idea of doing so seems exciting to me also but looking
    at the facts make me change my mind. These nations have not
    found anything valuable in space that is useful for humans
    from so many exploratory trips. No Planet is good for habitat of humans
    as well as animals.

    According to me, Developed nations have more responsibility towards
    developing nations and they should help those in need of money.
    Developing nations are already dealing with hunger, High illiteracy
    rate, power cuts, water shortage, vaccine shortage and less exposure
    to many resources. Helping developing nations will be for the betterment
    of society. For example, To fight coronavirus we need immunity at the
    world level but because developing nations have less vaccines achieving
    that is a hard task, only chance of success at this is when
    developed nations will come forward and help these nations.

    To conclude, Space exploration is an exciting venture but we have too
    many problems on earth which we should deal with first and money seems
    to be solution for most of the problems. Governments should not spend
    huge amount of funds on space activities and rather help those in need
    of it.

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