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    Swati14

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    November 19, 2021 at 8:01 PM in reply to: Discuss both views – [Doctors in rural areas]

    In many countries, medical and educational facilities are not appropriate in some villages. Because of that, few people think that recently pass out teachers and doctors should work in rural areas for some duration while others argue that people should have right to work wherever they want to, after finishing their studies.

    Due to the lack of medical and educational facilities in villages of many countries people get inadequate treatment of their diseases and do not get a better education system either. If newly graduated doctors and teachers invest some of their time in those locations, then it will help villagers in the improvement of their health because new doctors expertise in the advanced knowledge and equipment to treat the various diseases, and, if teachers educate the children with modern methods, then education systems will be improved. For example, in India, many villages still suffer from the lack of treatment and children of those areas are lagging from good teaching facilities. If these professionals help those people, then they can come up from the shortcomings of medical facilities and illiteracy.

    On the other side, some people argue that these professionals have the right to choose the place of their work because like other professionals, they should be allowed to work anywhere in their home country or abroad. These people, who become a doctor or teachers after intense hardship in their fields, should not be bound to work in rural areas. To illustrate, these people also have the right to work from their choice like chartered accountants, engineers suchlike.

    To conclude, in my opinion, professionals like doctors and teachers should give some of their time to the betterment of rural areas so that those people get the good facilities regarding the medical treatment and modern education system. In this way, villagers can equally participate in societies and it improves the status of the rural areas and it also helps in the development of those countries.

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    November 12, 2021 at 11:25 PM in reply to: Problem-Solution Essay [Night Shifts]

    These days, most people work many shifts, especially in the night shift, due to night shifts employees face some problems. This essay will first look at the problems, and then explore solutions for them.
    Many employees who work night shifts face numerous health issues because they follow an inadequate daily routine which hampers their health adversely like they often miss doing morning work out or having food on time. Additionally, these people, especially women, feel insecure in terms of safety because they usually reached their homes late at night. Due to that they always have a fear of mishappening while they returning home from their offices. For example, in India, due to the increase in crime rate, night shifts workers, especially women, feel insecure while they travel through roads.
    To solve these problems, companies should be provided health checkup facilities in their office premises periodically which would help employees to track their fitness. In addition, employers should be provided proper security to their night shift workers, particularly women, so that they can reach their homes safely. To illustrate, companies should provide one security guard with women employees and give home drop facilities to them so they can reach their homes safely.
    To conclude, some of the problems like health issues and insecurity are felt by employees who work night shifts. To solve this problem companies should facilitate health check-up camps on regular basis and provide security while dropping their employees in late at night.

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    November 11, 2021 at 11:16 PM in reply to: Advantages – Globalization

    These days, it is become tough to differentiate between countries because people all over the world adopt the same culture regarding fashion, watch similar kinds of TV programs, having the same taste of brand and food. This essay will argue that the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks.
    Owing to acquiring global trend by people of many countries like same eating habits, brand for wear and similar choice of TV channels, benefited to the people in various ways. Firstly, if people go for higher studies or immigration, then they will settle easily over there because they already adopted the culture of the foreign country. Secondly, they would not feel inferior as they land abroad because they already have some idea about the culture of that country. For example, nowadays many people from India move into another country for different purposes, but they do not face any kind of problem because in India most people follow western culture in their daily lives.
    On the other hand, people who oppose this say that children are forgetting their roots and lineage when they follow global fashions. This statement is not true because the ancestry of any person cannot be changed even if he living in another country. Indian people who live abroad follow usually follow the same customs as they would pursue in India.
    To conclude, adoption of International standards is in various aspects help people to settle in foreign countries without any problems and inferiority, and values can be given by parents in foreign countries as well.

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    November 8, 2021 at 5:35 PM in reply to: Letter [Translation Agency ]

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter regarding some translation work. I have a few documents which need to be translated from French to English.

    I am working in a multinational company and I received some e-mails in French from my new client. These e-mails include standard operating procedures for the project which my team and I need to understand for further proceedings.

    At present, I do not have any resources for translation work. Before moving forward, I just want to confirm the mentioned details in those e-mails. Due to this, I want to need it to be translated into English.

    I request you to please translate these documents on an urgent basis as I have to reply to those e-mails by tomorrow evening and all future conversations with the client depend on it.

    I am looking for hearing from you soon and hope for a prompt reply.

    Yours faithfully,

    Swati Jain

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    November 8, 2021 at 2:29 PM in reply to: Opinion Essay [Customer Reviews]

    Most people prefer to look at customer reviews about the products before buying through online platforms. I completely agree with this opinion and think that customer reviews play a crucial role in online shopping.

    Nowadays, many people opt for online shopping and customer reviews about a product play important role in their decision-making process. These reviews provide a true picture and feedback about the product, which people are going to buy. Many online shopping platforms allow customers to upload actual images and videos of products which benefit other people to have some idea of the actual images and know-how of the products, and help people to save their money and time if feedback is not good enough. For instance, Amazon entitle their customers to share actual pictures, videos and feedback about products, this helps others to decide on the same products and save their time and money if a product is not according to the desire of people.

    These days, similar kinds of products are available on various online platforms. Because of that, people go for customers reviews first before finalising their order and choose that which have a good response. This feedback reduces the confusion of people while selecting a product for them. For example, many online platforms like Amazon and Flipkart have similar products, in this case, customer reviews help people to select the right product for them.

    To conclude, in my opinion, customer reviews help people by providing real images and videos of the products and save their money and time by giving true feedback on products. It also helps in deciding the product from various options available on different websites.

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    November 5, 2021 at 3:26 PM in reply to: Discuss Both Views [Architecture]

    Some people believe that new houses should be constructed in the same style as older houses were built in that area. However, others think that local councils should allow people to select designs for their houses according to their taste and interest. This essay will discuss both views and provide a conclusion in the end.

    Construction of new houses in accordance of old houses can save a lot of effort of people because selecting a floor plan for a house is a challenging and time taken activity, but if people select the identical design, they will not be required to do any extra effort to build their houses. Moreover, if they adopt the same design, they will not need any service of architects and it will save their money too. For Instance, many people pay a huge amount to architects for designing houses which increased the cost of building the houses, but in this case, people do not require to spend on the same.

    On the other hand, some people want to design their houses according to their style. These days, different types of new designs are available through various sources and individuals want to select a contemporary design for their dream houses, and do not prefer to follow old-fashioned designs. For example, designs for houses are revamping the old designs with modern techniques and architecture. Due to this, some people argue to built their houses according to new technology and design.

    In conclusion, according to my opinion, people should be allowed to choose their own design houses by the local councils because the style and techniques of the houses are changing on regular basis and most people want to adopt new techniques rather than old-style layout.

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    October 31, 2021 at 11:29 PM in reply to: Task 2 Essay – Sports / Gender Issues

    These days, society pays more attention to men’s sports as compared to women’s sport. This essay will look at the reasons that why that has happened and argue that it is a negative development.

    Female players do not get the same treatment and encouragement as received by male players from society. The reason for this discriminatory behaviour by society is, due to the inconsistency of women in their sports careers like they take a break within their careers. Additionally, female players take retirement within a few years whereas men play for several years and because of that men receive more popularity and have a huge fan following as compared to women. To illustrate, a male player generally gives 20 years to his career but a female player gives barely 10 years to her career and takes retirement. Because of this, men’s sport is more popular than women’s sport in society.

    It is a negative development because this attitude thwarted the women and lessen their morale. Due to discouragement from society, they are feeble and not able to give their concentration to their sports. This is also distraught to those women who want to build their careers in sports.

    To conclude, because of irregularities and early retirement of women players, society does not pay much attention to their sports, but due to this attitude, women players lost their confidence and feel abandoned. This behaviour also snatched the dreams of aspirants who want to make a carrier in sports.

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    October 31, 2021 at 1:07 AM in reply to: Letter to a neighbour

    Hi Ragini,

    How are you? First of all, I would like to thank you as you are ready to take care of my home in my absence.

    As you know I have a dog named “Tomy”. I cannot take him with me because pets are prohibited in my hotel where I am going for one week. I had requested the hotel staff but they denied it. I want one favour of you that please feed and take care of him when I will not be here.

    Although he is healthy and vaccinated, if in case he would not feel good for any reason, please let me inform that time, I will give you my contact number when I come to you to hand over my pet.

    I want you to buy a gift for yourself on my behalf as a token of gratitude towards you.

    Thank you so much for helping me out.

    Your neighbour,

    Swati

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    October 28, 2021 at 2:21 PM in reply to: Letter – Selling furniture to a friend

    Hi Manisha,

    How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. In our last conversation, you mentioned that you need a study table for your home.

    I brought one study table some days before and now I want to sell it because it is not going to fit in my room. Perhaps, I have taken the wrong measurements when I went to purchase it.

    It is a brand new study table and comes with one year of warranty. It contains two big drawers and enough space on top. Its colour is dark brown and made with oak plywood.

    If you are interested in that, then you can come to my home this coming Sunday. I will be at home on that day and can provide you with all details about the study table.

    See you soon, take care.

    Your friend,

    Swati

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    October 28, 2021 at 2:14 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – [Crime]

    In many countries, the rate of serious crimes are declining, but people perceive even more insecurity as compared to the past. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening, and then explore the solution for it.

    The feeling of insecurity is increasing in some people because of augmented road accidents day by day. Nowadays, a huge number of vehicles run on the road, due to which graph of road accidents also boomed. People usually violate traffic rules, and due to that innocent people lost their lives or sometimes got serious injuries. To illustrate further, in the past vehicles were limited, due to that chart of accident cases was also down, but these days, news about accidents and deaths are very common, which increases the fear of insecurity in the people.

    To solve this, the fine for traffic violations should be increased because if a fine increases it will also lead extra financial burden on traffic violators. Due to this amendment, people will not break any traffic rules in future. Secondly, the procedure for issuing a driving licence should be more strict, so that inefficient people would not get the permit, and it will also help to reduce any kind of casualties.

    In conclusion, due to excessive numbers of vehicles, people often do not feel safe as some drivers do not follow traffic rules which increase casualties, to solve this problem traffic fine should we increased, and procedure for driving licence should be strict.

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    October 25, 2021 at 11:40 PM in reply to: Opinion Essay – Space Travel

    These days, it is noticed that research and development about space exploration have taken place by developed countries. Governments of those countries that are rich and have advanced technology are wasting an excessive amount of money on space exploration. I completely disagree with the opinion and will cast the reasons to support my view.

    Scientists of developed nations have been researching space and its intricate structure for a long time. We have received many modern technologies due to their exploration and GPS( global positioning system) is one example of it. This technology is very intuitive and enables us to know everything about the route of destinations. For example, this technology gives every information which would require for a particular landing place such as, traffic, duration and shortcuts to reach out there.

    Secondly, space is full of mystery, and we do not have any idea about what jeopardy is waiting for us. This space exploration help scientists to find out about the possible menace from space. The government have spent lots of money on modern technologies and types of equipment for more research in this field. These facilities enable scientists to study space and about any possible threat from space that could be disastrous for humankind.

    To conclude, governments, of developed countries, should invest large amounts of money in the field of space exploration so that astronomers do more research on space and develop new technologies that would help humankind in future and also warn us about future hazardous situations.

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    October 22, 2021 at 4:33 PM in reply to: Formal Letter of Apology – GT

    Dear Mr Singh,

    I am writing this letter to apologise to you because I failed to submit the project on time due to my carelessness.

    I could not complete my project on time and because of that, we lost our precious client. Our company has suffered from a big loss as this client provided us with a huge business and it happened due to my fault.

    I was working on this project for last so many days. Some days before, suddenly, my laptop has crashed and I lost all my data and key information due to that, I have missed the deadline of the project.

    From now onwards, I will store my all information with a backup file, for my all project to ensure that it will not happen in future. Further, I switched over to a more reliable antivirus which would provide more safety to my laptop.

    I hope you understand my circumstance and I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours sincerely,

    Swati Jain

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    October 22, 2021 at 12:40 PM in reply to: Advantages/Disadvantages [Gap Year (Education)]

    In the current scenario, it is becoming more famous to take a gap year between finishing high school and applying to a university. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this situation in a more elaborate way.

    Most students opted for directly switching to corporate in place of higher education because it provided them lots of opportunities to grow and enhance their skills. This experience could help them to choose an appropriate university course in which they might be enrolled in a later year. For instance, students could be more confident after having some corporate experience with them, also they would have good knowledge about the most demanded and highly paid jobs and they can plan to pursue a course based on their experience.

    On the other side, the phenomenon contains some drawbacks. If students take a year gap after completing their high school, it will lead to change their thoughts and they would not go for higher education in future because some students after having some money enjoy their freedom and fulfil their needs by themselves without depending on their parents. These kinds of benefits to turning away from tertiary education and sticking with the corporates which not only provide the experience and skills but also make them independent.

    In conclusion, practical experience and monetary benefits are essential in one’s life but before switching to corporate every student should complete his university education which provides them numerous opportunities than before and would help to get more secure jobs.

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    October 20, 2021 at 6:42 PM in reply to: Letter – [Feedback] (Reception Area)

    Dear Thomas,

    I am writing this letter regarding the suggestion for improvement in the reception area of our company.

    Most of the complaints, which I received, were about the filthy conditions near the reception area and people would not be felt comfortable when they visited us and some people also find that sitting arrangement at the waiting room is not appropriate, due to which, sometimes even they would not get the space to sit if there are more persons than usual.

    Our reception area is very important because this gives the first impression about the company and it the only place where visitors comes for their inquires. It also reflects the status of our organisation.

    In my suggestion, I advise to some changes in the facility department of our company because their work not up to the mark and appropriately either. Secondly, I would recommend doing some changes regarding the sitting arrangement near the reception. These steps may be improved the ratings of our company and increase positive feedback from our customers.

    I look forward to hearing from you soon.
    Yours Sincerely,

    Emma Cook

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    October 20, 2021 at 1:03 PM in reply to: Writing Task 2 – Problem-Solution [Teaching]

    Presently, in some countries, very few people choose to teach as their profession, especially in high schools. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening, and then explore solutions for it.

    The primary reason for this is that teachers get quite less compensation as compared to other professions. Mentors do a lot of effort to sharpen the career and skills of children, but in the end, they would not receive good salaries, due to which they usually switch to other fields and earn reasonable money. In Addition, nowadays, teachers are not respected by high school children, and students often misbehaved with teachers, and these kinds of learners are also sheltered by their parents.

    To solve this problem, teachers should be empowered with some authority to ensure that discipline and decorum should be followed by high school children. Additionally, teachers are also entitled to get a good salary package as other people receive in different professions, which boost the morale of teachers, as well as enhance the gusto in them to do the best in their field. These steps also decrease the retrenchment in the education sector. To illustrate further, if teachers receive good compensation, it will automatically improve their enthusiasm towards teaching, and reduce the chances of turning away from their jobs.

    In conclusion, fewer salaries are a crucial reason for decreasing the numbers of teachers, and those students, who are in high school, do not want to listen to their teachers and give respect to them anymore. Educators should have some power that able them to scold the high school children and make them follow all rules and regulations of the schools.

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    October 16, 2021 at 5:04 PM in reply to: Problem- Solution [Business]

    Most of the businesses believe that newcomers, who recently completed graduation, have a lack of interpersonal skills like work as team members. This essay will first look at the reasons why this is happening and then explore the solution for it.

    The primary reason for this is that newcomers are usually unaware of the work culture of an organisation, and their mindsets are different from those required by the corporate surroundings. The new employees have not been any experience of corporate etiquette and environment because these skills had not been taught by the schools. For instance, in school students have informal associations with their classmates but when they enter the corporate world, they have to maintain a formal alliance with their colleagues.

    To solve this, every company should conduct an orientation program that could help newcomers to fit in a new environment, and it also helps to learn the work culture of an organisation. This kind of training program can stimulate the new employees to grasp new things readily, boosts their confidence, and they could learn, slowly and gradually, about the corporate environment.

    In conclusion, unawareness about work culture and inadequate knowledge of corporate behaviour are the problems due to which they are lacking interpersonal skills, and to solve these problems organisations should conduct an orientation program which could help new employees to cope with the new corporate culture and enhance their confidence level.

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    October 14, 2021 at 8:39 PM in reply to: Double Question [Shopping]

    In the present time, shopping is becoming more famous as a free time activity. Although, some people believe that this includes both pros and cons effects. This essay will discuss the reason for the popularity of shopping and examine its effects on individuals and society.

    Nowadays, shopping has become more popular amongst people because of the development of technology. These days, people enable to do shopping at their own pace and they do not need to go out shopping. People can compare as many products and services through various e-commerce platforms, and order online the desired ones. For instance, most people use the Amazon website for their daily needs or luxury items.

    However, it is noticed that there are some negative effects of excess shopping on individuals and society. Sometimes, online marketing influence individual to purchase unnecessary stuff which cause them to spend more, and which affect their savings and future investment plans. More shopping impacts society adversely because of the peers’ pressure over society. It is illustrated further that, if a person is purchased luxury items then it creates psychological pressure on society to do the same, and those people have to purchase that stuff unwillingly.

    To conclude, these days, shopping is quite famous because most people can do shopping by using online platforms. This trend impacts negatively on individuals and society because people, who do not want to buy useless things, have to purchase because of psychological pressure from peers and society.

  • In many countries, maximum adults are preferring to live with their parents, despite they have completed tertiary education and got employment. There are both advantages and disadvantages to this phenomenon; however, this essay will argue that the advantages completely outweigh the disadvantages.

    To begin with, people who choose to live with their parents even after getting a job over those who live their parents and settled somewhere else. For one thing, these people can look after their parents’ profoundly because many parents required extra attention to their health due to the increase of age, and people who live with parents can be balanced these responsibilities with their job simultaneously. In addition, these people can get proper guidance from their parents about any problem or challenge, which face by them in their profession or personal life. Their parents can advise them in the right direction because they have a lot of years of life experience.

    The disadvantages are few and comparatively minor. Those who disagree to live with parents even after getting a job argue that adults could not be moved easily if it will be demanded on their professional work front. They believe that it is unlikely to shift with parents to a different location because older people would not be ready to leave their dwellings easily and could not cope with new situations and surroundings.

    In conclusion, the advantages of adults who live with their parents outweigh the disadvantages because it can allow them to good take care of their parents, and they can also get the best advice and solutions to problems which may be faced by them in their life.

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    October 9, 2021 at 9:48 PM in reply to: Discuss Both Views [Decision Making in Businesses]

    Some people argue that the decision-making should be restricted to an only higher level, while others say that employees should also be an integral part of decisions for a business. Should only seniors take all the decisions of the company or company should include employees also for the same? In my opinion, I believe employees’ views taken into consideration while making any decision for the company.

    Many organisations believe that only supervisors are qualified for every decision because they have more experience and in-depth knowledge about the company. Senior-level management holds a reputed position in a company and it is believed that they hold a better position to take any decision for the business. It is illustrated further that, the boss is much more aware of the mission of the company and he can make the best decision with the help of his experience and knowledge. Thus, the argument for the involvement of only higher management is made justified.

    On the other hand, some people favor that employees should include in the decision-making process because they work at ground level and they are very well aware of the root cause of any problem and challenges faced by the lower-level employees. In other words, a team member has a good theoretical and practical knowledge of real difficulties faced by staff members and if they are also included in decision – making process then it will help the organisation in achieving the right decision.

    To conclude, although the experience of senior management plays a key role in any decision for a company, team members’ viewpoints should not overlook by the organisation because they have ground knowledge which may be helpful to make a decision.

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    October 5, 2021 at 2:32 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY- SUCCESS

    Some people do not get good results in school but in the end, they become successful in their carrier. In my opinion, the reason of this issue is antiquated education system and I think the most important element for success is the persistent efforts of a person to achieve pre-set goals.

    The primary reason behind this case is the antiquated education system which is followed by most of the schools and its syllabus has not been revised or changed for a very long time. Moreover, this conventional approach also creates discrimination among students because those students who are good at science or mathematics are only considered brilliant students, and other students are considered unqualified students. The education system is unable to recognize the skill set that has by those unqualified students. For instance, if a student is good at Biology, and not at other subjects, his overall performance at school would be below par and children do not have any option other than to follow their own syllabus.

    The most important key to success is the persistent efforts of a person to follow his goal. A person should have a positive attitude, determination and should to do work hard for achieving the pre-set goals. A person should capable to belligerent even if he has faced defeat in life. To illustrate, many well-known famous faces who have been through various problems in their life but now become role models for everyone and everyone admired and followed them. So, I believe that a person should have a passion to attain success in life.

    In a nutshell, I would like to say that the poor and old-fashioned education system is the key to the non-performance of some people and in case of the most significant factor behind the success is a forerunner.

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    October 2, 2021 at 9:16 PM in reply to: GT WRITING TASK 1: FORMAL LETTER- COMPLAINT

    Dear Sir or Madam,

    I am writing this letter in regards to a problem that arises due to my roommate and due to which it is difficult for me to study for my examinations.

    My name is Olive Peterson and I am pursuing a post-graduate program at McGill University. I stay in the hostel provides by the university and locate nearby it.

    I live in a sharing basis room with my roommate but for some time she being an obstacle in my studies and I am unable to concentrate on my learning. She usually held late-night parties with her buddies which have a high volume of music that annoys me, due to which I cannot study or sleep either.

    I am requesting you to please change my room and shift me where I can focus on my studies because my exam will start shortly and can also live peacefully.

    I look forward to hearing from you.

    Yours faithfully,

    Olive Peterson

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    September 29, 2021 at 2:32 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSSION+OPINION ESSAY- MEDIA AND ADVERTISEMENT

    It is considered by many people that what children watch on Television effects their behavior and others believed that the duration of watching Television effects them more. In my opinion, the content of the Television program can more influences the children’s behavior.

    On the one hand, children are easily manipulated by advertisements they see on the Television, for example, they demand from their parents what they have seen on it and sometimes we come to know some children involved in crime after watching a few crime shows. Nowadays Television contains much-uncensored material which also impacts children’s mental health. It will cause for aggressive and violent behavior to the children.

    On the other hand, children’s physical and mental health are adverse effects due to watching Television. Children’s eyes are effecting due to flashlight which comes from Television and it results as eyes pain or decrease in eyesight. These days we can see many small children having spectacular because of this. Moreover, if children watch television for a long time it brings backache problems for the children as well. Additionally, children become obese in the present day and least bother about outdoor sports activities which result as obstacle to the physical growth.

    In conclusion, I would like to say though both the aspects have their own implication, I believe that contents of the Television programs matter on children’s behavior . So, in my opinion, some parental control should be there and parents should apply child lock feature on Television and aware to their children about the hazardous impact of Television and encourage them to outdoor sports activities.

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    September 27, 2021 at 2:42 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: TWO DIRECT QUESTION ESSAY- HEALTH

    Presently, a very less number of people take an interest in walking. Walking is acknowledged for health as the benefit for the health but this time number of people taking interest in that area. This essay will discuss why people do not prefer to work and provide options for what can be done to handle this difficult situation.

    The main reason for this is the increase in the number of vehicles on the road because it is time-saving and easy for people to commute from one place to another, which also provides comfort to the people. For instance, in the past, everyone preferred to walk for grocery shopping and bring children from school but at present, all work is done with the help of vehicles, so because of this walking becomes very less these days.

    The solution to this can be to join a gym or sport which would be a better option for walking and is necessary to stay fit. For example, after joining, a fitness center makes people fit and fine. The more they work out, the more they become healthy. Moreover, it keeps the body healthy and makes the mind refreshed.

    To conclude, walking is beneficial for the health but it is it can be seen that most people do not walk regularly due to their dependency on several vehicles. To solve this problem people should join any gym or sports and they will be staying healthy and fit.

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    September 24, 2021 at 2:31 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY: SCHOOL

    It is being presumed that physical fitness of children is a duty of their parents and thus school should not squander precious time to have sports lesson as a subject of the curriculum. I completely disagree with the above statement because school can provide best facilities for sports to children and children can learn it in a more effective and corrective way.

    Students can learn as many sports as they want on the school premises because most of the schools having facilities to organize a variety of games. Generally, schools have well-qualified trainers under whom supervision children can become physically and mentally fit. Regular sports keep offspring active and give them a healthy lifestyle. The more sports they do, the healthier they become in life. On the side, parents can motivate and energize them to participate in sports.

    Additionally, if schools keep sports as subject students will understand sports in a promising way. They will become regular do physical activity as per schedule which would not possible in parents guidance because children could not too disciplined there. Under the guidance of a trainer, children can perform any type of sport competitively and enthusiastically. Moreover, some of the children can make sports as their career in future and would play national and international level.

    To conclude, I would like to say that physical health of the children is the joint responsibility of school and parents, where the school should incorporate sports as a subject in its curriculum as it builds physical and mental fitness children and parents can encourage and motivate their children for more participation in sports.

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    September 24, 2021 at 2:21 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OPINION ESSAY: SCHOOL

    It is being presumed that physical fitness of children is a duty of their parents and thus school should not squander precious time to have sports lesson as a subject of the curriculum. I completely disagree with the above statement because school can provide best facilities for sports to children and children can learn it in a more effective and corrective way.

    Students can learn as many sports as they want on the school premises because most of the schools having facilities to organize a variety of games. Generally, schools have well-qualified trainers under whom supervision children can become physically and mentally fit. Regular sports keep offspring active and give them a healthy lifestyle. The more sports they do, the healthier they become in life. On the side, parents can motivate and energize them to participate in sports.

    Additionally, if schools keep sports as subject students will understand sports in a promising way. They will become regular do physical activity as per schedule which would not possible in parents guidance because children could not too disciplined there. Under the guidance of a trainer, children can perform any type of sport competitively and enthusiastically. Moreover, some of the children can make sports as their career in future and would play national and international level.

    To conclude, I would like to say that physical health of the children is the joint responsibility of school and parents, where the school should incorporate sports as a subject in its curriculum as it builds physical and mental fitness children and parents can encourage and motivate their children for more participation in sports.

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    Swati14

    Member
    September 21, 2021 at 9:29 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: DISCUSSION+OPINION ESSAY- LEISURE

    To have innumerable money and least free time is better than make less money and have more leisure time. Some people prefer to earn more money and have less time for their own whereas other people even get less money but give priority to have more time for themselves. In this essay, I will discuss both aspects and gives my opinion.

    Money plays a vital role in every individual life. No one can live without money because money can fulfill their daily needs and necessities. If people earn more money then they can give a luxurious life to their family members and make them satisfied. Moreover, money boosts the standard of living for a family. Money is also a symbol of society and it reflects the social status of a family. The more money a family has, the higher they are well-off.

    On the other side, an individual who earns even limited money but if he pays more attention to his family will have an optimistic life because money can give happiness up to a certain extent and all people need a family with whom they can share happiness and sorrow. Moreover, using this approach these people could more focus on their health and find more time for workouts. In addition, they can join some hobby classes which would soothe their stress level and enhances positivity.

    To conclude, I would like to say that have more money is not a bad aspect but go after money does not seem quite good for people and their families because no one can buy happiness from money all time. Every person should have a balance of their personal and working life to pursue a splendid lifestyle.

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    Swati14

    Member
    September 19, 2021 at 10:18 PM in reply to: WRITING TASK 2: OUTWEIGH ESSAY- FOOD

    Nowadays in fast-moving modern life, most people are attracting towards fast food as their main course food. In my opinion, this lifestyle could not beneficial for the health of the people because it augments diseases and obesity in people.

    Fast food looks very delicious and anyone can easily attract to it but it gives harmful effects on the health of humans. Fast food contains high levels of sugar, artificial sweeteners, and processed chemicals which lead people towards various types of diseases like diabetes, cholesterol, and heart attack. Most people eat fast food without notice that it includes lots of chemicals which prone their body to these types of diseases. In my country, more and more people are becoming part of this deceases because of their unhealthy lifestyle. The more they eat junk food, the higher chance of their illnesses.

    Another problem is obesity which causes due to fast food consumption. Fast food having excess calories which increase the fat of the body and it also always settle in the human body which causes weight gain. To get rid of this, people have to do exercise on daily basis, the more we doing exercise, the less chance for becoming fatty but due to lack of time and busy schedule, no one cares about this and affliction with overweight. Obesity also brings many more problems with it like back pain, knee pain and many other types of difficulties which will become a key for further health complications.

    In conclusion, I would like to say that everyone should follow a healthy lifestyle and minimize fast food intake because fast food only leads to many kinds of illness and overweight problems for people.

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    Swati14

    Member
    September 17, 2021 at 3:24 PM in reply to:

    Dear Mark,

    I am writing this letter to request you to grant me one month of leave because of some medical emergency has come in my family and I could not able to join office for a month.

    Yesterday, my mother has fallen off in the bathroom and her spine got affected and now she is suffering from a slip disc problem. Now doctor prescribed an urgent surgery of the spine otherwise my mother would not able to stand in the future. Her surgery has been scheduled for tomorrow and I need to present there.

    In my absence, I will take follow up through my e-mails and be in regular touch with my colleagues for any clarification. I will check my folder regularly so that I would keep updated on office work.

    I have informed my colleagues Mr. John and I transferred my responsibilities to him and I will available over the phone if needed and attend any meeting if required.

    I looking forward to hearing from you soon and hope for a positive reply from your side.

    Yours Sincerely,

    Jacob

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    Swati14

    Member
    September 15, 2021 at 2:07 PM in reply to: GT LETTER WRITING TASK 1: LETTER OF ACCEPTANCE

    Dear Jim,

    Hope you are doing well. I have just received your offer letter in which you provide a good designation to me in your company. I would like to express my gratitude towards you for provide me such wonderful opportunity there.

    I was eagerly waiting for such a nice opportunity from your company for a long time as it is well-known company and have wonderful goodwill in the market. The employees of your company always happy and satisfy with company policies and culture. Recently, I come to know that your company also provides crèche facility to the children of female workers.

    Currently I am stuck in my current job and for me it is not possible to resign from this company as I have signed a bond with company last year and it will be completing in three months. So, I have to be with company for this certain time period.

    I have been thinking about your job offer and decide that I would able to join your company if you can wait for just three months. It is my humble request you to please delay this offer by only this period so that I join your company as I do not want to let this offer go from my hands.

    I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

    Thanks,

    Rebecca

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    Swati14

    Member
    September 14, 2021 at 7:35 PM in reply to:

    Dear Mr. Brown,

    I am writing this letter request you to get me to transfer for six months in our headquarter in London.

    One of my colleagues had been there and he attended a new training program from head office which has improved his performance and polished his skills. So, I also have the gusto to enroll myself in excellent training which can my enhance abilities to work.

    I can set up my work remotely because my job profile demands virtually assistance so that I would be able to work from there on weekends and simultaneously complete my training on the other side. Though in case of any urgent requirement one of my colleagues Mr. Williams will take charge of that and I will assist him with clarification if needed.

    I request you to please put forward my application to the boss and kindly convince him of my special request because I do not want to miss this splendid opportunity which usually comes once in a while.

    I am looking forward for hear from you soon and ae for a positive answer from your side.

    Regards,

    Ema

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