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I am interested in joining your institution to study English. Since your institution is one of the highly ranked colleges to teach English in my country to study abroad, I will be delighted to be accepted at your college.(Better sentence: your institution of the highly ranked colleges to teach English in my country, it got me interested in joining the institution for my English studies and I would be delighted to be accepted at your college)
Although your website has lots of information about the English course, I need some clarifications regarding the school itself. I will be grateful if you send me more details about the scholarships that are provided to international students and if there are any part-time jobs I can apply to before I start my classes.
Moreover, I am interested to find out if you provide private one-bedroom apartments or all shared accommodations with other students. I personally prefer to have my own bedroom so I can focus on my studies without being disturbed.
Also, it will be very convenient if the accommodation is near the campus, so I don’t have to waste time during transportation.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Eman Rashed
Good work.
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