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t Genetically Modified (foods) could be a reasonable solution,
finally to be accepted to (by) the society.
Moreover, our cultural values abide us with the (certain) type of food we consume on daily basis,
repetitive usage of words (tackle
Because it’s not feasible to grow the original cops due to weather and climate challenges, but (“but ” is redundant here) with few DNA changes these consumables could be compatible
conjunctions like furthermore, in addition to it can also be used instead of being repetitive with “moreover”
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