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  • isha

    January 3, 2023 at 6:06 PM


    News journals are becoming least significant in the 21st century’s digital era, with frequent updates of news accessible on our various devices, such as phones and tablets.I partially agree with this statement, as it mainly depends on age and adaption to technology. We will be discussing this in detail below.

    Newspapers are playing a crucial role by providing detailed information to society and encouraging individuals’ reading habits. Newspapers have their own benefits. for example, while the information in the papers was slow but surely true. People can rely on the accuracy of this thoroughly tested information. More than that, you can read it again and again if you want to. And taking care of them is not too difficult. Newspapers are also reused by people, and are of great help in life, such as serving as decorations, for tables. An outstanding benefit when compared with the Internet is the cost. Buying a newspaper is far cheaper than paying for the Internet each month.

    However, the advent of the Internet has given people great choice. Apparently, online press helps news seekers all over the globe access local news as well as global news published by a variety of internationally prestigious newspapers, for example, the BBC, New York Times, and Wall Street Journal. The availability of online news far outweighs that of printed news, and it continues to dominate the news industry.Online news must be adaptable to all ages, but there are few disadvantages.As older people find it inconvenient to read news online while continuously watching television, their eyesight suffers.

    In conclusion, newspapers are still a critical source of information, but the Internet will provide news and entertainment that tends to be accurate. But the Internet has more benefits, so its more emergence is inevitable.

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