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Introduction: some maintaining- some that maintaining
keeping your belongings organised- and being organised
at residence- at your residence
As well as at- and office
BP1: in leading- to lead
Although, majority- Although, a majority
some are excelling it- some are excelling in it
has now- it has now
is also- has also become the perspective
BP 2: youth are: youth includes
Presanation- presentations
at right place- at the right place
Conclusion- have- can have
fruitful outcomes- a fruitful outcome
Band Score: 4/6 Keep Writing!
