ShahbazAdministratorAugust 10, 2021 at 3:28 PM
Do not use the exclamation mark in an IELTS essay.
To sum up, I would say that you did a good job with grammar and vocabulary. It is clear to see that you are able to express yourself well and also proofread what you’ve written. However, the main problems are with task response (the ideas sometimes lose focus) and internal paragraph structure.
Essay Score : 4.5/6