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  • Falak

    October 10, 2021 at 11:53 PM

    The pie charts compares (compare) online shopping

    online sales of electronics and appliance was (the) highest in Canada in 2005

    but (while) in 2010, online sales of food & beverage and video games increased

    As is presented in (2005) pie chart, electronics and appliance

    Feedback : comparison and contrast of details needs to be more effective. Avoid Repetitive usage of sentences , work on sentence structure.

    Band : 1.5/3

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