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The pie charts compares (compare) online shopping
online sales of electronics and appliance was (the) highest in Canada in 2005
but (while) in 2010, online sales of food & beverage and video games increased
As is presented in (2005) pie chart, electronics and appliance
Feedback : comparison and contrast of details needs to be more effective. Avoid Repetitive usage of sentences , work on sentence structure.
Band : 1.5/3