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  • Falak

    October 10, 2021 at 11:53 PM
    260 Network Points
    Activity Points 6000

    The pie charts compares (compare) online shopping

    online sales of electronics and appliance was (the) highest in Canada in 2005

    but (while) in 2010, online sales of food & beverage and video games increased

    As is presented in (2005) pie chart, electronics and appliance

    Feedback : comparison and contrast of details needs to be more effective. Avoid Repetitive usage of sentences , work on sentence structure.

    Band : 1.5/3

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