AdministratorOctober 10, 2021 at 11:53 PM260 Network PointsActivity Points 6000
The pie charts compares (compare) online shopping
online sales of electronics and appliance was (the) highest in Canada in 2005
but (while) in 2010, online sales of food & beverage and video games increased
As is presented in (2005) pie chart, electronics and appliance
Feedback : comparison and contrast of details needs to be more effective. Avoid Repetitive usage of sentences , work on sentence structure.
Band : 1.5/3