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  • Shahbaz

    October 18, 2021 at 12:47 PM

    * “positives and negative effects on lives of ” (positive and negative effects on the lives of…)

    * “this might result to have detremental ..” (this might result in detrimental impact…)

    * “can lead to wither away more hobbies” (can lead to the withering away of…. [‘wither away’ might not be apt in this context)

    * Some problems with the use of articles.

    * Word choice and sentence structure, although free from serious errors, can still be improved.


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