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* ‘As you requested in your last letter regarding to search the house and furniture.’
This sentence was a bit confusing. Usually when we start a sentence like this with ‘as’, it has a second part. ‘As you did ABC, I did XYZ’ . ‘Regarding to search’ also does not work.
* ‘a glass on its top’ I feel like it should be ‘a pane of glass’ or something like that and not just ‘a glass’.
* You can use time markers like ‘this weekend’ , ‘next weekend, ‘this Friday’, ‘every month’ etc. without any prepositions. So, you can say ‘I would like to invite you and Lira to dinner next weekend.’
Score : 4.5/6
