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  • Falak

    November 2, 2021 at 8:50 AM
    280 Network Points
    Activity Points 6270

    Feedback : Thesis statement could be more effective. Make use of punctuations after connectors (on one hand, on the other hand,)

    curriculam (curriculum)

    This is were (where) art is an

    career on (in)

    No examples found

    Avoid usage of personal pronouns in general statement

    Use range of sentence structures

    Band : 2.5/6

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