AdministratorNovember 9, 2021 at 12:46 PM
* ‘the modern era’
fashioned clothes’ might not be correct. Please check.
*’ and have similar kind of food eating habits’. Since it was a series, the last item should have used an ‘and’
* ‘advantages of globalization outweighs’ (outweigh)
*’Children wanting to buy expensive branded things’ ‘The participle (-ing strucutre) was used incorrectly here. This is probably not incorrect —> ‘children wanting to buy expensive things is a huge challenge’, but in your sentence, the connection between the clauses is ‘faulty’ . ‘Children wanting to buy expensive branded things because their friends are doing so which leads to fight’,
* There is a point I want to make about task achievement. However, it would just take too much time to write. I will elaborate this in the class. Please remind me if I forget.
Score: 4.25/ 6