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  • Shahbaz

    November 11, 2021 at 12:48 PM
    50 Network Points
    Activity Points 7670

    * (its vs it’s ) <– look this up. You used ‘it’s’ in two places where it should have been ‘its’. This would increase the total number of errors.

    * A few problems with articles. ‘in lifestyle of citizens’ (in the lifestyle/lifestyles of )
    * ‘ the world tourism’ <– we don’t need ‘the’ here.
    * ‘drawbacks …. outweights’ (it should be ‘outweigh’ since ‘drawbacks’ is plural)
    * Make sure you write the letters i,e,t etc. clearly.
    * ‘detrimental’ was misspelled
    * Usually, we say ‘advantages/disadvantages of something’ and not ‘ disadvantages for’

    * ‘homogeneity among different cultures discourages ‘ Since we are discussing this issue in a ‘theoretical’ way, this sentence would look better with ‘would’ —> ‘homogeneity among different cultures would discourage’

    * ‘result in forgetting their ‘ (I believe it should be ‘result in them forgetting their’, but I need to think about it a bit more.


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