FalakAdministratorNovember 28, 2021 at 11:27 PM
Introduction needs to be paraphrased, avoid copying the question sentence as it is.
Overall should be the overview of graph , short and crisp ; not as detailed you have given
Follow the structure of task-1 as discussed in class , grammar slips have been observed , which can be improved while proof reading. Though the usage of adjective and adverbs is appreciated .
Band : 1/3