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I am writing this letter in context of moving to Cardiff.
Currently, I am working from Scotland but my hometown is in Cardiff, where my old parents are staying. As their health conditions are deteriorating day by day, I need to be with them for their care.
Moreover, commuting to Cardiff from Scotland every week is very time consuming, tiring and expensive. Furthermore, we have a branch in Cardiff which will be 20 minutes drive from my home.
Therefore, requesting you to move me from Scotland to Cardiff location effective from 1st Jan 2022.
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