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  • Falak

    December 19, 2021 at 12:43 PM

    belive (believe)

    Make use of cohesive devices and sentence structure could be improved. Although I would have appreciated even more if I had found “why punishment should not be the resort for students” as it will add more cohesion to the essay.

    keep writing!!

    Band: 3.5/6

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