This is in regards to your advertisement in the Sydney herald about living with your family and taking care of your child. (I would appreciate if you explained the purpose of writing more clearly by presenting yourself as suitable candidate)
An ideal approach would be discussing each bullet point in distinct paragraph with supporting details
Keep writing!!
Band : 1.5/3
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