AdministratorJanuary 6, 2022 at 12:34 PM660 Network PointsActivity Points 26550
eligibility criteria is also increasing (becoming stringent)
(in fact) the person can (himself) help his family financially
Opinion should be stated in conclusion not the vice-versa, it is always a good idea to reflect your opinion in introduction as will add more coherence and more sync to writing. There is definitely room for improvement in lexical resources.