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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 7, 2022 at 9:30 AM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26550

    It is true that (argued by) some people believe that studying in university/college

    Introduction is not up to the mark

    Introduction , body paragraphs should be framed as discussed in the class.

    At few instances, cohesion is compromised

    Conclusion is not supposed to have a new angle , rather summarize your passages

    Cohesive devices will enhance the readability.

    Band: 2/6

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