AdministratorJanuary 7, 2022 at 9:30 AM660 Network PointsActivity Points 26550
It is true that (argued by) some people believe that studying in university/college
Introduction is not up to the mark
Introduction , body paragraphs should be framed as discussed in the class.
At few instances, cohesion is compromised
Conclusion is not supposed to have a new angle , rather summarize your passages
Cohesive devices will enhance the readability.