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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 13, 2022 at 12:21 PM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 27170

    government people – authorities

    conclusion is incomplete (it is just paraphrasing the question)

    at few instances, informal style of writing has been observed.

    Try to reduce verbosity by using complex-compound sentences.

    keep writing!!

    band : 3.5/6

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