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  • Falak

    Administrator
    January 16, 2022 at 10:32 AM
    660 Network Points
    Activity Points 26550

    Traffic jams mostly occur during (on) major roads or right near big malls, theatres, bus stands and railway stations

    Introduction needs to talk about causes and solution to tackle this problem rather than just exaggerating the issue.

    Paragraphing has been done inappropriately throughout, B.P 1 is mentioning problem X, and the solution offered is to problem Y.

    B.P 1 and B.P 2 should be dedicated to causes and solution respectively.

    Band: 2.5/6

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