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some people are not gonna (going to) ask for it
The major example to this is LAYS (some popular brand of) potato chips
Therefore (,) all makers : comma is placed after therefore, when we use it as an introductory element
On the other hand,(In addition to it/moreover,) consumers should start carrying their own bags – additive connector is required here
Number of words: 495 (I believe a good essay can be easily achieved in maximum 280 words or so , always keep time track)
Feedback : answer is well developed with apt explanation and examples. Lexical resources was also considered . Keep writing!!!
Band: 4.5/6
