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  • Falak

    Administrator
    March 6, 2022 at 11:02 PM
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    There is clear overall progression throughout the essay , task achievement has been achieved. The only part which can be effective is sentence structure. Use conjunctions and cohesive devices to reduce the verbosity.

    Don’t use capital letters after commas.

    Keep writing!!

    Band: 4/6

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