AdministratorMarch 29, 2022 at 7:22 PM
Opening statement is not establishing the fact that it is an informal letter
I came there at (avoid “at”) last night.
second bullet point was on “Describe the watch”, hence answer has not been fully developed.
Yours Faithfully, (this is not a forma letter); lots of love would work
Try to extend ideas in order to make answer ,a fully developed one.