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The given Pie chart is (exhibits) information
methods of transport used (by people) to travel
We will illustrate and compare the changes in the modes of transport for travel; The units of measurement are used in percentile. (not required ; percentile is wrong usage instead proportion can be used)
During the year 2004(,) almost
the same no (number) has been reduced by nearly a quarter an
and only 28% people took car to reach university. (in 2009)
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