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  • Manprit

    April 12, 2022 at 7:09 PM

    minor errors noted: plays/builds/nowadays/these resources

    spelling error: economic growth/recruit/foreign/creates/benefit

    use capitalization for places

    avoid giving a comma before ‘but’

    avoid using a personal pronoun in body paragraph.

    use connectors to begin body paragraph 2 [on the contrary/on one hand/moreover]

    add connectors like -to conclude at the end

    note: add more constructive sentences/work on spelling errors and focus on adding connecting terms

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