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  • isha

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    April 29, 2022 at 7:12 PM
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    These days, supermarkets sell all those items which are, the majority of the time, imported from other nations rather than supporting local sellers. Pricing and resources can be one of the few reasons for buying products from overseas (this statement is not clear). This essay will provide logical reasons and negative development of such activity and how it will affect our growing economy.

    There are numerous reasons why Walmarts provide a diverse range of products to customers, one of which is that purchasing products from other countries has become more cost-effective, and they are providing products that cannot be manufactured in their own country. Price plays an important role when it comes to imports. Sellers will purchase those commodities that can be bought at low rates. In other words, businessmen will sell those goods which have a profit margin, as products bought at cheap prices can be sold at high prices. Secondly, when goods are bought from overseas, a lack of resources is also one of the major reasons. For instance, sometimes there isn’t enough capital, equipment, land, or climatic conditions that are required to produce those items. As a result, sellers have to buy from other countries. Blueberries, avocados, and raspberries are commonly imported items.

    As a result, selling commodities from other countries affects the economy of the country and local producers. In school, we have read about export and import. When the country’s trading(trade) is dependent on imports, it shows the major portion of the money is spent in other countries, which leads to employment and development in those countries. Furthermore, it hampers the growth of local businessmen or producers.

    In conclusion, the rise in imports has given consumers the opportunity to have a variety of items but has affected the economy of their own homeland. Thus, serious actions should be taken by the government to increase taxes on imports and provide subsidies to local producers.

    Feedback:

    Intro: Thesis and outline is not clear.

    Grammatical errors like articles and punctuation marks.

    Rewrite the introduction and clearly state your side in BP2 and conclusion.

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