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he following pie chart shows the reasons and benefits of cycling to work and driving to work.
Overall, riding to work illustrates more benefits for health and fitness and causes less pollution when compared with other advantages like no costs and no parking problems. Whereas the major reason for going to work by vehicle was comfort, which covered half of the chart, the safety part occupied the least amount of space among all the other reasons.
In cycling, health and less pollution occupied 30% each and covered more than half of the chart. The second reason given by most people was that two-wheelers had no parking problems, which held 15%. 13% of humans said that going to work by cycle requires no cost and saves a lot of money. 12% of people thought riding a two-wheeler to work was faster than riding a four-wheeler.
The major reason preferred by most people for traveling to the office by vehicle is comfort, which accounted for 40% of the chart. The rest of the other reasons, like being faster than cycling, carrying things to work, covered 14% of the total, and very few members claimed that driving is safer than riding.
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