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  • Falak

    Administrator
    May 16, 2022 at 7:53 AM
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    The following charts shows (show)

    I would suggest to mention other two categories as well in overall

    gradually rise in 12 % (gradual rise of 12%) in the year 2011(

    you may write the previous year data without brackets.

    as it is reduced to (by) 9% in the year 2011

    There is no information on food in body paragraphs , though it was included in overall.

    Make use of cohesive devices to establish comparisons etc.

    Band: 1.5/3

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